........to be continued!!!
Begins the next episode,ranging from majors and minors
was yet to discover that it was against me
.....like a pure roadside toad...i looked up-perceived the dirty world
I am half within or full without,anyone out of the two...
the melody is flying away...catch!says i....
but ...hiccups....falters....and falls he....
..............to be continued!!!
1 comment:
A good one.There's a element of surprise in the style.But the use of music...its lingering...fading etc. in many of your poems makes it cliche.Try to express the same feeling in a different way.
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